*shocked*
Feedback for my POP1 written assignment:
Coverage: A
Analysis: A
Presentation: A
This is an excellent first attempt at writing of this kind, Lizzy. You have clearly read around your subject and are able to use referencing succinctly and efficiently to support your argument. You clearly have an excellent grasp of this material and are able to talk confidently about Boal's practice, his ideological framework and how that manifests in companies' work. You run out of time a little when it comes to your own performance piece but this is understandable when you have given such an eloquent explanation of drama as a living art form in the opening pages. Very well done.
Overall mark: 72%
THAT'S A FIRST!!!
*faints onto floor*
Coverage: A
Analysis: A
Presentation: A
This is an excellent first attempt at writing of this kind, Lizzy. You have clearly read around your subject and are able to use referencing succinctly and efficiently to support your argument. You clearly have an excellent grasp of this material and are able to talk confidently about Boal's practice, his ideological framework and how that manifests in companies' work. You run out of time a little when it comes to your own performance piece but this is understandable when you have given such an eloquent explanation of drama as a living art form in the opening pages. Very well done.
Overall mark: 72%
THAT'S A FIRST!!!
*faints onto floor*
Well done!! Im very proud of you and did I not tell you that you'd get a first?! :)
I don't really care if I repeat Phil - well done indeed!! Daddy says 'excellent' - we're both very proud of you.
See you very soon
xxxx
well done my little cuddle-buddy! i is very proud... lots of gold stars and cuddles coming your way!
love n stuff x x x
woohoo!! *dances a little victory dance*
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